Tuesday, May 22, 2012

News Briefs

Who: Travis Logan, senior
What: won first place in visual merchandising
When: two weeks ago
Where: Union Colege
Why: His goal is taking first place at state so he can qualify for nationals in Florida
How: by winning first place at DECA competition

Summary lead, version 1: Travis Logan, a senior won first place at the district DECA competition.

Summary lead, version 2 : Travis Logan an upperclassmen won first place for visual merchandising.

Summary lead, version 3 : A high school senior  name Travis Logan had just won first place in visual merchandising in a district competition.


Story: Travis Logan, a senior have just taken one step closer to his goal, to compete in the national DECA competition. He just receive first place in visual merchandising that was held at Union College two week ago. Now on his way to the state contest in April, he's determine to make it into the nationals in Florida. 


Along with Travis, Dee Contreas a junior won second place in the written test and Ducan Pfiegger, was mention as a honorable contestant in the role play. As he rose his way up to his goals, his competitor will still be Contreas and Pfiegger. 



Who: Highschool Girls from 10-12 grade
What: Tryouts for Color Guards
When: Tuesday, May 25 and Thursday, May 27
Where: School campus, west of the parking lot
Why: to join marching band starting in fall
How: Contact Ms. Cindy Barker, Color Guard adviser, room 103 

Summary lead, version 1:

68 girls participated in color guard tryouts in order to join marching band.

Summary lead, version 2:

68 girls participated in color guard tryouts in preparation of second round for marching band.

Summary lead, version 3:

68 girls planning to join marching band participated in color guard tryouts.

Story:

Color guard tryouts are going to be held on May 25th & 27th for girls between 10th & 12th grades. 68 were able to participate in the tryouts held last fall. These Color Guard tryouts were held at the school campus on the west side of the parking lot. Next week, a second round will be held in order for girls to join marching band in the coming Fall.

The color guard tryouts are an excellent opportunity to connect with others and support your school. The squads will perform choreographed routines at football and basketball halftime shows. You need to be able to dance and flag-twirl in order to join up. To participate in color guard tryouts, you must contact Ms. Cindy Barker, Color Guard adviser, in room 103.

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Friday, May 4, 2012

Lead Article

Who: Michael and Robert Meeropol and their parentsWhat: Their Father was convicted of espionage conspiracy along with giving bomb/military information to the Russians and their mother was convicted on flimsy evidence both giving them a death penalty as spy's. When: 1953Where: Rosenberg, Lower East Side apartment where they arrested Julius, the boys father.Why: Now The boys stand up for their parents and the injustice that was adduced to them. How: By giving presentation and description to people to let them see how injustice it is. Michael, 65, is a professor and chairman of the economics department at Western New England College in Springfield. Robert, 61, is a lawyer and runs the Rosenberg Fund for Children.

Lead : Adopting their foster parents’ surname, they staked their own claim to radical campus politics in the 1960s. Then in 1973, they emerged to reclaim their identities as the sons of Julius and Ethel Rosenberg, determined to vindicate their parents.

Rewrite : By using their foster parents name to hide their real identities, the two boys came back and speak up to the public in 1973 to show that their parents were treated wrong due to America time period in their depression state. 



Who: Owner of a Actions Comics No. 1, Stephen FishlerWhat: Owns an Untouched copy of an Actions Comics No. 1When: Now, during an auction this ThursdayWhere: West CoastWhy: Many people want it because it's the first comic book first appeared on the newsstand for 10 cents a copy in June 1938.
How: 12 year later after he brought the comic book, Fishler left it in his mother's basement, hoping that it will increase its value on how much it cost.


Lead: After being hidden away for years, a copy of the original "Action Comics No. 1" comic book, featuring Superman and friends, will make a comeback -- to the tune of about $400,000


Rewrite: The original copy of  "Action Comics No. 1" had been found after being hidden away for years. Many people including experts reader estimate that it will cost about $400.000.

Wednesday, May 2, 2012